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- Liked the work
- Likes the way I am writing
- Engaging photos when walking and exploring my area, thinking has I walk, seeing it like a new place
- The litter is not really working within the series but there is a value to them just maybe in a different context/ piece of work. The litter acts like a decoy and shifts the focus away from the bollards
- The viewer makes there own reading of the bollards, what are they thinking, how do they feel. Human nature to read body language and facial expressions the gaze the viewer brings their own baggage
- Liked the short-written work which could be incorporated somehow
- See Wolfgang Tilman and his work which looks at the everyday banal almost alien detached view allowing us to see
- See Eileen Perrier – grace loss of her mother – physical trait – similar people – gap in between teeth
- Portrait Practice shoot engage the subject give space give little direction practice unit it become automatic like driving a car choice of person authentic framing test shoots gaze the reading of the person contact click
- Read Quite - Sue Cain
- Would you Remove the litter and consider text where do they fit if they fit at all
- Write up a little about the bollards
- Consider the portrait element a little more what would I write if they were people
- Consider the gaze
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- Just before email a quick proposal for the assignment - What, Why and How
- Add contact sheets to aid and evidence selection and post edit process
- Submit assignment when it is near completion which allows development of the work
- Focus and Approach
- Set stage and action.